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Quote: Considering it was a follow-up to "Ranma turns into a Darkstalkers-style succubus" porn, I'm surprised you expected quality here.
I never read the first story.
I read the first chapter or two of the first story, and therefore didn't bother to start the second.
Also, having looked at the first chapter of that "Hokage's Hat" fic, I'm a little unclear on how it can be described as "one of the
better responses" to that challenge. For all I know the story itself may be less of the "cliche"/"wish-fulfillment" sort than the
other responses I've seen, but it can't possibly be good enough to overcome that writing style - and I've seen other responses (including, I think,
the very first one) which were better than this one looks to be.
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Probably the best responses are these two:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4976535/1/T ... way_Hokage
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4412313/23/ ... ing_Hokage
By EdStargazer and Jonque respectively, and neither have bothered updating for a while.
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Quote: The Wanderer wrote:
I read the first chapter or two of the first story, and therefore didn't bother to start the second.
Also, having looked at the first chapter of that "Hokage's Hat" fic, I'm a little unclear on how it can be described as "one of the
better responses" to that challenge. For all I know the story itself may be less of the "cliche"/"wish-fulfillment" sort than the
other responses I've seen, but it can't possibly be good enough to overcome that writing style - and I've seen other responses (including, I
think, the very first one) which were better than this one looks to be.
If you saw that then you are lucky enough to have never seen a lot of the other responses. That said, I like it and it really is not that bad.
Especially after the first few chapters, for one thing it shows ninjas with actual brains. Not sure what you mean by the writing style thing though, it does
not look much different from 99% of the other stories I have read in the past
Edit-and as this is a new fic thread, take a look at this, http://www.tthfanfic.org/...lachai+Dawning+Light.htm a nice Anita BlakeBuffy the Vampire
Slayer crossover that focuses on Dawn
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Holy SHIT.
... and the award for best high level nijutsu battle goes to... My Idol Ch10.
ffn id 4256257
Technical quality is unfortunate, but even if you don't like first person stream of consciousness at all skip to 10 and read it, most of it is narrating
while watching Jiraya, Orochimaru, and Shinobi no Kami Sarutobi-sama fight.
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We are going to have to disagree here. Ignoring the format... it just doesn't actually do much for me. I think the ones in Spying no Jutsu are better...
or the canon Naruto/Gaara fight from the exact same moment or the Battle of the End. Mostly it was lots of fire attack negating stuff and Orochimaru no
selling attacks.... and the ending makes no sense as Ero-senin in sage mode can own Kabuto for speed.
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Eh, oh well. (I certainly won't argue against Spying No Jutsu!) Mayhap you'll like this one better - Food For Thought has excellent technical quality
and some less commonly seen spins, and even if it's only loosely pulling into a coherent overplot the trip has been fun too. ffn id 3962320
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http://www.fanfiction.net..._between_Man_and_Machine
Terminator (Sarah Connor Chronicles) / Star Trek Voyager. It's the time of the Federation and Cameron is still around, keeping a watchful eye over
humanity.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5394042/1/Mahoranma
Negima / Ranma. Only the start so far but it seems interesting.
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Searching for the Power ( http://www.ficwad.com/story/116579 ) is an HP/multi fic rather like a merangue pie -
a crust of plot that keeps the whole in shape even if each slice only has a little, plenty of sticky lemon custard, and a sweet layer of wacky hijinks, honest
romantic moments, and action as whip cream on top. Note that login is required due to the rating, and even that index page is probably NSFW. That's right,
it's a lemon, and getting a plot based rec for competent but not uber 6th yr Harry.
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09-28-2009, 02:17 PM
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Time Loop Prank Wars
What would happen if Innortal's 'Time Loop' Ranma found himself in the role of the bad guy? Specifically, Jail Scagiletti?
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http://waddis.livejournal.com/tag/fanfi ... ck+sparrow
A very good Xander-in-Africa fic. It's on LJ, so you'll have to start at the bottom.
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http://alternatehistory.com/discussion/ ... p?t=113866
It's unfortunately a forum-based story, which means you'll have to page through comments to get to the meat, but the concept is decidedly thought provoking:
What if, in 1952, Walt Disney had become President?
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10-01-2009, 03:41 AM
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Am I Smart? by Penguin-sa. A retelling of the "Am I Pretty?" incident, only Ranma imprints on Nabiki.
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Hunted Tribes and its side-story, "... but somehow a most melancholy". Started as a rewrite of one of the first nBSG/Battletech crossover fics, now has added Cannonshop craziness. Imagine what the Colonials would do if confronted with a fully-operational Caspar M5 drone...
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xander fic. "When Xander dressed up as a being with phenomenal cosmic powers, he got everything that came with."
http://www.tthfanfic.org/...y+Bitty+Living+Space.htm
hellsing/chuthulhu-tech by academia-nut
http://forums.spacebattle.../showthread.php?t=153703
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4294303/1/Childhood
naruto: what if one of the anbu that watched over him got attached?
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DrunkenGrognard has a sequel to Grand Tour out, it is called Journey.
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5371934/1/A ... of_Azkaban
hp crackfic...
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10-07-2009, 02:48 PM
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New M McGregor fic: Following The Leader
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Evolution, A Banner of the Stars tale
Written by Ken Wolfe. He wrote El Hazard Earth. And it's complete also.
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Evolution, A Banner of the Stars tale
Written by Ken Wolfe. He wrote El Hazard Earth. And it's complete also.
That was awesome. Thank you for killing my sleep schedule, the story was well worth it.
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Project Ako Ranma OVAs
10-18-2009, 11:48 PM
Project_Ako_Ranma_OVAs Ranma needs money after the failed
wedding and Nabiki finds him a job as a body guard for a certain rich girl..
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The Blue Footed Booby has made several small Kino's Journey stories that are all roughly connected (in much the same way that the various episodes of
Kino's Journey are roughly connected) and I strongly recommend them all.
http://www.fanfiction.net...82/The_Blue_Footed_Booby
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http://www.fictionpress.com/s/504871/1/Falcons_Reach
On the one hand, it's not fanfic, but original.
On the other, it's Vathara.
And now, far behind times, I must sleep.
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